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Love this
“Whispers burning deep”
This line in particular :)
A whisper can be so much, it in itself can be a touch when delivered proper
Thank you for sharing
“Whispers burning deep”
This line in particular :)
A whisper can be so much, it in itself can be a touch when delivered proper
Thank you for sharing
14th Jan 2020 7:22am
A whisper leaves more of a mark then any touch when it comes from the right person
Thankyou 🙂
Thankyou 🙂
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20th Jan 2020 9:21pm
So subtly sensuous... this is a wonderful little senryu, Countygal!
Such a vivid little scene you've painted with such few words. Excellent! :)
Such a vivid little scene you've painted with such few words. Excellent! :)
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