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Bleed With Me
Two demons found each other
parasites upon our auras
Yours found the worst in me
or was it - a conspiracy?
I'd never hurt you
never!
Despite this truth
when we're together
we bleed these days
as much as ever
It's not you that triggers me
I'm sure I'm not attacking you...
Yet funny little words like bees
sting our souls with great malease
Worst of all the two of us
will never see it coming
Yet I insist we take the risk
Come here
sit
and bleed with me
parasites upon our auras
Yours found the worst in me
or was it - a conspiracy?
I'd never hurt you
never!
Despite this truth
when we're together
we bleed these days
as much as ever
It's not you that triggers me
I'm sure I'm not attacking you...
Yet funny little words like bees
sting our souls with great malease
Worst of all the two of us
will never see it coming
Yet I insist we take the risk
Come here
sit
and bleed with me
Published 12th Jan 2020
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12th Jan 2020 8:09am
A very interesting write. It comes off to me as the battle within oneself when in a toxic relationship but its all you've ever known, so there is a fear of letting go. Essentially holding on too what bleeds your soul dry. Loved this one!
❤️Thank you❤️
It could read be that way.
I don't like spoiling interpretations but the alternative can be enlightening.
In this case, I'd say it's two empathic lovebirds with c-ptsd... whose insecure attempts to communicate easily get turned upside down.
As though dancing in a wobbly canoe.
It could read be that way.
I don't like spoiling interpretations but the alternative can be enlightening.
In this case, I'd say it's two empathic lovebirds with c-ptsd... whose insecure attempts to communicate easily get turned upside down.
As though dancing in a wobbly canoe.
14th Jan 2020 00:17am
💖💝❤️🌹Thank you for the nomination. I'm humbled and grateful. By some chance some coins might even land in my hat, too, because of you.
14th Jan 2020 1:14am
12th Jan 2020 12:16pm
Great diction and flow in this wonderful poem. Sent it straight to my reading list. Well done, my friend!
12th Jan 2020 5:06pm
12th Jan 2020 1:45pm
12th Jan 2020 5:05pm
12th Jan 2020 4:16pm
Iron sharpens Iron—“Faithful are the wounds of a friend”
One nit, Jess—
that trigger(s) me
One nit, Jess—
that trigger(s) me
12th Jan 2020 4:48pm
15th Jan 2020 12:10pm
Beautiful poem, if we bleed, let us do so together.
I fell in love with the imagery in the first stanza♥
I fell in love with the imagery in the first stanza♥
Anonymous
17th Jan 2020 10:15am
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25th Jan 2020 10:50pm
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25th Jan 2020 10:56pm
Thank you!
I find my interactions are always fraught with risk. Nobody is safe, in my opinion.
Aside from every way this can be us... I'm a cheeky girl who understands why few people do comedy. It's enough to make you shit your pants ...or smudge a good relationship...
And then there are always those amazing and unexpected moments... when nobody was joking... but... you still manage to become that annoying little sister...
Oooh. It stings! 😝
I find my interactions are always fraught with risk. Nobody is safe, in my opinion.
Aside from every way this can be us... I'm a cheeky girl who understands why few people do comedy. It's enough to make you shit your pants ...or smudge a good relationship...
And then there are always those amazing and unexpected moments... when nobody was joking... but... you still manage to become that annoying little sister...
Oooh. It stings! 😝
Anonymous
- Edited 22nd Feb 2020 10:45am
25th Jan 2020 11:01pm
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