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Smokey Eyes
Surrender is not a choice,
beheld
in a sultry seductive voice
those sweet sweet sullen lips
demanding attention
smokey eyes
slowly smolder and flirt
as tongues dance the night away
there's bullets in the breeze
caressing a temptress tease
saluting an inner peace
where warm words melt
there is no resistance
as dossiers are spread out
on white cotton sheets
every attribute and detail drilled
over and over
undercover secrets to be blown
the moon blushes
there's a smoking gun
but now's not a time to run
beheld
in a sultry seductive voice
those sweet sweet sullen lips
demanding attention
smokey eyes
slowly smolder and flirt
as tongues dance the night away
there's bullets in the breeze
caressing a temptress tease
saluting an inner peace
where warm words melt
there is no resistance
as dossiers are spread out
on white cotton sheets
every attribute and detail drilled
over and over
undercover secrets to be blown
the moon blushes
there's a smoking gun
but now's not a time to run
Published 11th Jan 2020
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11th Jan 2020 1:18am
Is she a goddess or perhaps a succubus?
Playfulness aside, I adored this right down to the title. The writing is dark and smoky as her eyes are. Very sexy little piece.
Playfulness aside, I adored this right down to the title. The writing is dark and smoky as her eyes are. Very sexy little piece.
12th Jan 2020 1:40am
15th Jan 2020 9:28pm
not sure why the term "sullen" works here so well but gosh darn it does and it stands out among some pretty kick arse line.
great write, tim
great write, tim
