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Do Not Gaze too Long
Do not gaze too long
into my deep eyes
lest you fall in love
those wells within me
Wells built deep and strong
through fearing dark lies
the darkness of love
drowns otherwise free
You think you love me?
knowing what that is?
Loving you yourself
a puzzle, you see
into my deep eyes
lest you fall in love
those wells within me
Wells built deep and strong
through fearing dark lies
the darkness of love
drowns otherwise free
You think you love me?
knowing what that is?
Loving you yourself
a puzzle, you see
Published 9th Jan 2020
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9th Jan 2020 5:39am
This is tight work, you usually post short stories of a kind. This is really good
9th Jan 2020 2:51pm
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9th Jan 2020 2:15pm
One must always love self in order to love others. Good, solid work, Jess. Very proud of how far you've come!
9th Jan 2020 2:53pm
14th Jan 2020 11:59am
Wow, this just went to the heart. Wow, that first stanza. Such powerful lines. I hope pieces of the puzzle come together
Love♥
NuBorn
Love♥
NuBorn
