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one step for the emo
here i stand on the twenty seventh floor
looking over the edge realizing no ones coming though the door
i have been stopped everytime before
so i stop and think of the ones i adore
I've taken so many pills but i still need more
too long have i battled in this bloody war
i take my final step for i am loved no more
looking over the edge realizing no ones coming though the door
i have been stopped everytime before
so i stop and think of the ones i adore
I've taken so many pills but i still need more
too long have i battled in this bloody war
i take my final step for i am loved no more
Published 1st Jan 2012
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5th Jan 2012 1:12pm
(no one coming though the door) i think it would flow better if you just take that out but that my thoughts i like it anyway good job keep writing
8th Jan 2012 8:39pm
24th Oct 2016 6:34pm
Don't Jump-Tokio Hotel. (Listen to that song --if you already haven't)
BEautiful piece!!
Darker.
BEautiful piece!!
Darker.
