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Candlelit
Spreading a handful of salts made by the sea,
into the bathwater where the steam ascends in dancin waves beckoning to me.
A glass of Scotch poured neat
waits next to the chaise,
summoning you to my ensuite,
while wax drips from the candles.
Your pulse quickens as I stand before you
and unlace my sheer gown.
I lean into you and place a kiss, taking a nip on your lip.
You watch,
while I bathe in the flickers of a candlelit room.
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Good my dear friend! Thank you for the RL. Warmth is a good thing in these cold days!
Love
L.
Love
L.
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- Edited 7th Sep 2022 7:45pm
10th Jan 2020 6:56pm
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10th Jan 2020 7:30pm
Thanks Danny! I always appreciate when you take the time to read and comment✌🙏
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16th Jan 2020 1:38pm
Thank you my dear poet for the RL and your kind words. I truly appreciate your input.✌💜