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Like medicine
Laughter comes and laughter goes
But laughter never stays
It tickles the ears and coddles the heart
Then slowly fades away
Bringing some joy, and mending somes pain
On solemn or sunless days
Laughters the lightning that kindles a fire
For broken hearts in decay
But laughter never stays
It tickles the ears and coddles the heart
Then slowly fades away
Bringing some joy, and mending somes pain
On solemn or sunless days
Laughters the lightning that kindles a fire
For broken hearts in decay
Published 5th Jan 2020
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5th Jan 2020 7:18am
6th Jan 2020 6:20am
5th Jan 2020 11:04am
Laughter truly is the best medicine!
I love what you did here:
"Laughter comes and laughter goes
But laughter never stays"
I never thought of it that way! Cool! ❤
I love what you did here:
"Laughter comes and laughter goes
But laughter never stays"
I never thought of it that way! Cool! ❤
It's a bit like magic, laughter is... I wrote that line as a teenager in a journal... and I wrote the rest last night after reading it. Thank you for your kind words, Scribbles!
5th Jan 2020 5:39pm
Laughter is fleeting much like Happiness
& one need only embrace and treasure the moments as they come
i really liked the tempo and rhyme to this spill
& one need only embrace and treasure the moments as they come
i really liked the tempo and rhyme to this spill
6th Jan 2020 6:22am
Thank you Tallen! And you are so right. Even if it is fleeting the memories can last a life time.
5th Jan 2020 8:22pm
This should be entered into a comp. It's crisp detail, in sharp relief, it's sing song lilt counterpointing the gravitas of it's subject matter, you accomplish a lot in a few stanzas. Beautifully rendered.
6th Jan 2020 6:12am
