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Breath
When a new dawn has come, I awaken.
You are the rays of sunlight that seep into my eyes.
My feelings run untamed deeper and deeper into my heart.
An intense joy, satisfaction, complete warmth.
I see you, right there.
I feel,
I see,
I breathe you.
Don't ever take your breath away.
You are the rays of sunlight that seep into my eyes.
My feelings run untamed deeper and deeper into my heart.
An intense joy, satisfaction, complete warmth.
I see you, right there.
I feel,
I see,
I breathe you.
Don't ever take your breath away.
Published 4th Jan 2020
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4th Jan 2020 6:27am
Lovely :)
Beautiful and touching, Wandering! Very much emotion in very few words - bravo!
Beautiful and touching, Wandering! Very much emotion in very few words - bravo!
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7th Jan 2020 11:21am
I really like it. I have never been in love but I love the fact that all of this shows deep emotion. I could feel every word.
8th Jan 2020 8:45am
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9th Jan 2020 5:23am
I thought this was a very nice piece of poetry.. :) pleez do comment/ review/ write your thoughts on my website & poems 2 thank you :)..
10th Jan 2020 12:19pm
