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Entombed
In this erupting
Vortex of bloody skin
Ripping away the bones
Within it’s winds the blood
Splatters freely from
the soul skin Without
No shell to hold
it in the blood
Runs down the walls
Of it's opened grave
Releasing the soul
into ravaging cyclone of pain
within it Another desolate
ending of the souls
In hells entombed flames
Vortex of bloody skin
Ripping away the bones
Within it’s winds the blood
Splatters freely from
the soul skin Without
No shell to hold
it in the blood
Runs down the walls
Of it's opened grave
Releasing the soul
into ravaging cyclone of pain
within it Another desolate
ending of the souls
In hells entombed flames
Published 30th Dec 2011
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Anonymous
30th Dec 2011 4:37pm
The rhyme was so strong and executed with genius perfection. Awesomely done
30th Dec 2011 5:30pm
thank you i not use to writing dark stuff but i'm trying to get the hang of it thanks for you comment
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