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Re. A Turn On
18th Dec 2019 11:24am
You've done it again! These interludes sure fire desire. One sweet submission to accommodate the condition.
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22nd Dec 2019 12:47pm
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Re. A Turn On
18th Dec 2019 3:57pm
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Re. A Turn On
18th Dec 2019 11:46pm
another superb erotic rhyme...very nice...(it's easier now to read when there are no words on the trees)
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22nd Dec 2019 12:53pm
Re. A Turn On
20th Dec 2019 10:20am
pummels...a great word, how you make it so real.
As always, I enjoyed the read.
you seemingly bring power to the word "submit"
As always, I enjoyed the read.
you seemingly bring power to the word "submit"
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Re: Re. A Turn On
22nd Dec 2019 12:54pm
not sure power and submit are compatible, but I like submission to resonate, which I suppose empowers it
Re. A Turn On
Anonymous
20th Dec 2019 5:52pm
a great piece of erotica! checks every box!
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22nd Dec 2019 12:55pm
Re. A Turn On
Anonymous
20th Dec 2019 5:53pm
a great piece of erotica! checks every box!
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Re: Re. A Turn On
3rd Jan 2020 12:04pm
Checks daddy's boxes
And his boxers, just in case
There are needs to meet
Smiles
And his boxers, just in case
There are needs to meet
Smiles
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Anonymous
3rd Jan 2020 3:21pm
Few things better than a great poem and a witty reply to a comment that followed! :-)
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Re. A Turn On
21st Dec 2019 2:52pm
Raw poetic elegance. I have yet to read another who can take such a graphic scene and put it into metered and rhymed loveliness. Now if only I could find such a lass as you to put your poetry into action with.
XoXoXo
John
XoXoXo
John
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Re: Re. A Turn On
22nd Dec 2019 12:56pm