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If Only
If only I were the rose in your secret garden
Let the flowers bloom at your window
Let the fragrance diffuses into your chamber
Let the peddles float in your bathtub
Be your company every night
If only I were the flower at your window
while sitting at the table
you would see my open heart
and detect the love from the bottom part
If only I were the fragrance in your room
while you rest and write
you would have me by your side
in every corner that you reside
If only I were the petal in your bathtub
while closing your eyes to dream
I would be the tender touch
comfort your weary body
Thank you for loving me
that in my heart grows
becomes a rose
Let the flowers bloom at your window
Let the fragrance diffuses into your chamber
Let the peddles float in your bathtub
Be your company every night
If only I were the flower at your window
while sitting at the table
you would see my open heart
and detect the love from the bottom part
If only I were the fragrance in your room
while you rest and write
you would have me by your side
in every corner that you reside
If only I were the petal in your bathtub
while closing your eyes to dream
I would be the tender touch
comfort your weary body
Thank you for loving me
that in my heart grows
becomes a rose
Author's Note
Love
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Re. If Only
16th Dec 2019 2:25am
So lovely...you breathe a sweet breeze with your verses, dear one...
J
J
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22nd Dec 2019 7:27am
Re. If Only
19th Dec 2019 5:25pm
Nice use of refrain to anchor the stanzas. Beautiful sentiment flowing through your write. 💖 Nice to see you Jasmine.
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22nd Dec 2019 7:25am
Re. If Only
22nd Dec 2019 6:33am
Perhaps you are those things to someone and you just don't know it.
Your expression of love is really sweet and beautiful... Just as your writing! 😊
Your expression of love is really sweet and beautiful... Just as your writing! 😊
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Re: Re. If Only
22nd Dec 2019 6:49am
Thank you, my dear friend, for the encouragement of the reading list. It's my honor.
Love
Jasmine
Love
Jasmine
Re. If Only
22nd Dec 2019 6:56am
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26th Dec 2019 8:05am
It's all because of the lovely one, my friend.
Thank you for sharing your thought.
Love
Jasmine
Thank you for sharing your thought.
Love
Jasmine
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26th Dec 2019 10:07am
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Re: Re. If Only
5th Jan 2020 7:14am
Thank you for stopping by and sharing your thought, my dear friend.
Love
Jasmine
Love
Jasmine
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14th Jan 2020 4:02pm
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Anonymous
15th Jan 2020 2:56am
Awe Rose........beautiful heart touching ink........you’re definitely a precious rare Rose writing with a fragrant pen.......tipping my pen in respect to you.......you’re a beautiful gracious soul........purple luv & hugs xo :)
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17th Jan 2020 1:33pm
Oh, my purple friend, glad to see you again.
I'm lucky to have you reading my work.
Love
Jasmine
I'm lucky to have you reading my work.
Love
Jasmine
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24th Feb 2020 2:50pm
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Re: Re. If Only
28th Feb 2020 5:10am
Thank you for the nice comment. Your words are precious for me.
Love
Jasmine
Love
Jasmine
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