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Sniffles
I'd cry
but I
live in
Michigan
and there's
enough water
here to make
me look stupid.
but I
live in
Michigan
and there's
enough water
here to make
me look stupid.
Published 16th Dec 2019
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16th Dec 2019 1:13am
16th Dec 2019 1:29am
16th Dec 2019 1:48am
Brrrrr
Puts a whole new meaning to the term 'Cry me a River'. . .
Perhaps great lake. . .skating rink. . .ice fishing pond. . .
i felt the essence of this Nikks. The 'what good would it do anyway'. . .
Puts a whole new meaning to the term 'Cry me a River'. . .
Perhaps great lake. . .skating rink. . .ice fishing pond. . .
i felt the essence of this Nikks. The 'what good would it do anyway'. . .
16th Dec 2019 2:03am
16th Dec 2019 5:01pm
Nothing wrong with it if it makes one feel better ... But there is a point of diminishing returns that comes to mind with your pic and words here ... The struggle often is to realize when one is at or past that point ... Heartfelt, poignant write and perfect pic ... Bless and love ... ..
16th Dec 2019 7:30pm
28th Dec 2019 1:33am
28th Dec 2019 1:36am
