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Fenestre'

Slung toward airs furthermore thru pane
Untold sin suffers a hidden silent shame
Begats a weary soul toward ground bed
Toss do tumble so find upon their head

*chorus

Written by runaway-mindtrain

Published 3rd Dec 2019

Author's Note

...from old French inherited of the Latin fenestra premeditates killing by throwing someone out of a window...

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Re. Fenestre'

summultima (uma)

3rd Dec 2019 9:34am

thematic of the title, quatrain so 'un'-derails.. in well laid out brevity.. though reaps in grimness, in as ominous prophesying verses.. should say the pic is a thoughtful addition, conveying more in its standstill archaic form ..n but the diffusing light through the thematic window....spins in the revelation or perhaps liberational direction amidst all you have to say however dark or blood or dead. Just me J, fab effort n format. write on :)

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