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hello, dragon.
I saw your scales one by one
Pink on the left
Right blue
And I can't choose red
Late
Lete
Already
Can flow go anywhere
I can't tell anything
Use symbols to Hiragana collapses
Urine leaks when I scold something
The world is difficult, but no matter where I go
A lonely that blooms
That's good too loneliness and river !
That's good too the figure that flies !
I saw your scales one by one
Pink on the left
Right blue
And I can't choose red
Late
Lete
Already
Can flow go anywhere
I can't tell anything
Use symbols to Hiragana collapses
Urine leaks when I scold something
The world is difficult, but no matter where I go
A lonely that blooms
That's good too loneliness and river !
That's good too the figure that flies !
Published 2nd Dec 2019
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9th Dec 2019 10:04pm
Hello, hanagara. Welcome to the site. Unsure what you mean when you say Lete. I've been over this a few times and I find it interesting. I'm very fond of the author Haruki Murakami and he often delves into loneliness, which speaks to me.
In kindness,
Daniel
In kindness,
Daniel
10th Dec 2019 6:22pm
thank you for reading.
"late" is I wanted to write that it was too late..
Haruki Murakami was urban, strange and thought difficult to read. You gave me the chance to challenge again
"late" is I wanted to write that it was too late..
Haruki Murakami was urban, strange and thought difficult to read. You gave me the chance to challenge again
12th Dec 2019 4:23pm
I would recommend Colorless Tsukuru Tazaki, my first of his books and the one that struck me most profoundly.
15th Dec 2019 8:42pm
