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rio grande raftsmen
♪a rhymed, mirrored double octet♪
“A dream is like a river ever changing as it flows and a dreamer's just
a vessel that must follow where it goes.” —Garth Brooks
deep
r i v e r
flow, my friend
i can h e a r y o u r
r i p p l i n g m e l o d y
o’er t h e steep p o r t l a n d i c
falls. the raftsmen bare their chests
to the n a k e d noonday sunshine
bamboo trains their sacred lifeline
knowing not a moment’s rest
till their rafts grow static
in night’s r e v e r i e
yet their candour
n e v e r ends
in h e r
sleep
a l l
their wives
a n d children
w a i t impatient
for t h e daily bread
that they m i l k traversing
hard the nipples of their trade
rustic tunes their t h r o a t s enticing
s c a r c e a m o m e n t for rejoicing
for t h e i r memories never f a d e
of deep wounds they’re nursing
many dreams l a y d e a d
o r i m p o t e n t
but ‘tis then
new vibes
c a l l
© Copyright 2019 November 28
by Clyve A. Bowen♫
“A dream is like a river ever changing as it flows and a dreamer's just
a vessel that must follow where it goes.” —Garth Brooks
deep
r i v e r
flow, my friend
i can h e a r y o u r
r i p p l i n g m e l o d y
o’er t h e steep p o r t l a n d i c
falls. the raftsmen bare their chests
to the n a k e d noonday sunshine
bamboo trains their sacred lifeline
knowing not a moment’s rest
till their rafts grow static
in night’s r e v e r i e
yet their candour
n e v e r ends
in h e r
sleep
a l l
their wives
a n d children
w a i t impatient
for t h e daily bread
that they m i l k traversing
hard the nipples of their trade
rustic tunes their t h r o a t s enticing
s c a r c e a m o m e n t for rejoicing
for t h e i r memories never f a d e
of deep wounds they’re nursing
many dreams l a y d e a d
o r i m p o t e n t
but ‘tis then
new vibes
c a l l
© Copyright 2019 November 28
by Clyve A. Bowen♫
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