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On the inside
Her smile
Her kindness
Her heart
Her voice
Her eyes
But in the inside
My forced smile
My sadness
My aching heart
My shaky voice
My eyes full with tears
Her kindness
Her heart
Her voice
Her eyes
But in the inside
My forced smile
My sadness
My aching heart
My shaky voice
My eyes full with tears
Published 27th Nov 2019
| Edited 29th Apr 2020
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27th Nov 2019 10:01pm
Yes indeed...a poignant existential poem my friend.
Balance & Harmony...Harry
Balance & Harmony...Harry
28th Nov 2019 2:29am
15th Dec 2019 11:15am
The honesty in this ♥
Some days (Most days) I feel like a drag and I feel all my emotions are forced
Some days (Most days) I feel like a drag and I feel all my emotions are forced
22nd Dec 2019 3:04am
22nd Dec 2019 3:15am
Interesting poem... Well expressed. Things are not always what they seem, I suppose. Silent suffering will lead to your own destruction... It is very important to have an outlet such as poetry to purge emotions.
