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Sometimes you just need a mental spanking
Master of brevity
Hit the nail
straight into my thick head
Painting effervescent hope
while I mop up the blood
Many humble thanks
Hit the nail
straight into my thick head
Painting effervescent hope
while I mop up the blood
Many humble thanks
Published 24th Nov 2019
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24th Nov 2019 7:08pm
24th Nov 2019 11:57pm
25th Nov 2019 2:02am
Yeah sometimes we need friends who can stab us in front with honesty
Great small piece
Great small piece
25th Nov 2019 2:13am
25th Nov 2019 4:08pm
Brava Titanium! You capture well our need for an occasional kick in the butt in order to find authentic happiness. You had me at spanking 😂
25th Nov 2019 7:37pm
Figured that might turn some heads. 😉
Not as fun as it sounds.... the truth still stings, despite my gratitude.
Not as fun as it sounds.... the truth still stings, despite my gratitude.
Well worked and worded gratitude, whom ever they are they will be chuffed with your poem
ps love the title too
ps love the title too
