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Northwest Quest
Northwest Quest
Zephyr breeze from the gray northwest
Chambered inside the walls of my chest
Expel the missive from my breath
not to accost the shadow of death
Penumbra behest the sunrise pale
Faint and fade a shadows veil
Silt and clay from shattered shale
On a northwest quest
To no gray avail
Zephyr breeze from the gray northwest
Chambered inside the walls of my chest
Expel the missive from my breath
not to accost the shadow of death
Penumbra behest the sunrise pale
Faint and fade a shadows veil
Silt and clay from shattered shale
On a northwest quest
To no gray avail
Published 23rd Nov 2019
Author's Note
I've had this piece exactly like this for months with intent to add to it, ultimately I decided to keep it as is.
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Anonymous
25th Nov 2019 4:43am
I don't rhyme well, so I envy your ability and thank you for sharing!
8th Jan 2020 8:32pm
Thank you! Sometimes it's hard to decide if the rhyming pieces take away from the integrity of the meaning. But ultimately, I think creativity shouldn't be assigned to one way or the other so I just go for it if it seems right
Anonymous
- Edited 29th Apr 2020 5:45pm
9th Jan 2020 7:44am
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