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Not such a misdemeanor
You are the beat
in so many
of our chests
I cannot fathom
the emptiness
your loss
would leave
in so many
of our chests
I cannot fathom
the emptiness
your loss
would leave
Published 23rd Nov 2019
Author's Note
A long overdue few words for a poet most deserving
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Anonymous
23rd Nov 2019 11:13am
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23rd Nov 2019 12:53pm
27th Nov 2019 2:41pm
Wow a creative poetic appeal to a fellow poet, in tribute to encourage their poetry comeback. Kudos for this great poem.
Pls pleez do review/ comment/ write your thoughts under my newest poem too.
Pls pleez do review/ comment/ write your thoughts under my newest poem too.
9th Dec 2019 9:54pm
See, this is why I need to stop being such a cunt. People might write lovely tribute poems like this about me then! Seriously tho, this is a sweet dedication. If Missy ever publishes a book, she could do a lot worse for a nice epigram.
Anonymous
10th Dec 2019 9:16pm
(I may have one in the works... 🤫)
10th Dec 2019 11:31pm
what's d'craic, Jack
not sure I've ever thought of you as a cunt, haha. had to look up epigram, I like it
hope you're well, good fellow.
[ dunno who needs to read this but... only 48hrs to save the NHS #don't vote Tory #y'cunt ]
not sure I've ever thought of you as a cunt, haha. had to look up epigram, I like it
hope you're well, good fellow.
[ dunno who needs to read this but... only 48hrs to save the NHS #don't vote Tory #y'cunt ]
10th Jan 2021 00:47am
Gosh, I'm late to the forum!
I've never read your poems, except for those you've posted in Freedom of Speech.
Couldn't but say how your economy of thought in this piece captures my attention. I really like it. Obviously, I will be reading more...
Sincerely
cab
I've never read your poems, except for those you've posted in Freedom of Speech.
Couldn't but say how your economy of thought in this piece captures my attention. I really like it. Obviously, I will be reading more...
Sincerely
cab
10th Jan 2021 1:04am
Céad mile fáilte, mo chara
and you are most welcome here. It's been a while I hope you're doing ok
yeah, I get on a minimum buzz a lot, so.e times it works well
thanks for your presence and words, sir
and you are most welcome here. It's been a while I hope you're doing ok
yeah, I get on a minimum buzz a lot, so.e times it works well
thanks for your presence and words, sir
