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Chris My Cute Wee Mouse
I have her picture in a locket
she's always in my pocket
its why my pocket smells of cheese
with crumbs of cheese debris
my inside jacket pocket is warm
it keeps her safe and out of harm
she's next to my heart every day
and forever I will keep her this way
she squeaks, she wriggles
she dances, she wiggles
she laughs, she giggles
when tickled she wiggles
the saddest thing is a sad wee mouse
a pocket of sadness becomes her house
but I have the power to make her smile
with Teddy bear hugs done all the while
to make her smile we laugh a lot
and sadness becomes soon forgot
we dance and we sing
fun becomes everything
her smile is cute
her laugh is a hoot
pretty? Oh, so absolute
soft and sweet like fruit
physically she's very far away
but one thing I would like to say
in my heart, I've created a cosy wee house
and in there lives this cute wee mouse
Published 21st Nov 2019
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23rd Nov 2019 7:43am
Absolutely adorable,witty and fun. I can always count on you to make me smile.
9th Dec 2019 11:35pm
I am glad it made you smile, my poem's work is done :-))
Thank you :-)))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))
Thank you :-)))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))
27th Nov 2019 1:55pm
Wow this is a fantastic poem , creatively rhymed and flowing so awesomely. Kudos for this brill muse on wee mouse in a pocket.
Pls pleez do review/ comment/ write your thoughts under my newest poem too.
Pls pleez do review/ comment/ write your thoughts under my newest poem too.
9th Dec 2019 11:36pm
Thank you so much I appreciate your comments being a skilled poet :-))))
I will check out more of your stuff :-)))))
I will check out more of your stuff :-)))))
