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"W.T.F."
So she cheated on me again.....
Alright then, cause you know the sweetest joy next to getting pussys revenge
First I'll get her hooked on the syringe
FUCK the needle!! I'll start building an awesome relationship with her children, have them call me dad, then walk out on thier lives leaving them deprived and sad
FUCK the kids!! I'll burn all of her clothes along with everything she had
FUCK the stuff!! I'll plant a kilo of cocaine under her bed and watch as she walks away in cuffs
FUCK jail!! I'll sell my soul to Satan in exchange for her to spend eternity in hell
FUCK all this!! I'll start going to church and pray to God to agree that she never even exist
Alright then, cause you know the sweetest joy next to getting pussys revenge
First I'll get her hooked on the syringe
FUCK the needle!! I'll start building an awesome relationship with her children, have them call me dad, then walk out on thier lives leaving them deprived and sad
FUCK the kids!! I'll burn all of her clothes along with everything she had
FUCK the stuff!! I'll plant a kilo of cocaine under her bed and watch as she walks away in cuffs
FUCK jail!! I'll sell my soul to Satan in exchange for her to spend eternity in hell
FUCK all this!! I'll start going to church and pray to God to agree that she never even exist
Published 18th Nov 2019
| Edited 19th Nov 2019
Author's Note
This is another old one, even though i have a pile of poems about ex's, when i wrote this it was about no one in particular. Comments are welcome, good or bad..
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18th Nov 2019 11:22pm
I like the downward spiral of the ever increasing intensity that doesn't let up. the repeat works well as does the internal rhyming scheme, although I think you could look at Fuck Jail again, as sale seems forced and if you had used the expected Sell then it will pick up the rhyme with Hell.
18th Nov 2019 11:47pm
Hey, that’s a good idea. Thank you so much for that advice. I love your idea and probably going to put it in practice
