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Ocean of Alone
I can't keep fighting
your perception of me
it's not that it matters
just that it stings
I've carried as much
as my mind will allow
but I keep finding ways
to keep breaking down
sinking sand
in my heavy heart
I don't need you
weighing me down
your perception of me
it's not that it matters
just that it stings
I've carried as much
as my mind will allow
but I keep finding ways
to keep breaking down
sinking sand
in my heavy heart
I don't need you
weighing me down
Published 13th Nov 2019
| Edited 1st Dec 2019
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drowning
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13th Nov 2019 6:05pm
14th Nov 2019 2:15am
I've been here before, it's tough. Eventually you just gotta realize how someone chooses to view you is beyond your control. Those who know you for who you are and love you in spite of flaws are the ones worth it, someone who doesn't want to see you for you won't no matter what you do. Nice write.
15th Nov 2019 5:05pm
Emotions come across clearly, nice use of brevity. Relatable work.
Check this out.
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/364566-i-couldnt-tell-you-if-i-met-myself-or/
Check this out.
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/364566-i-couldnt-tell-you-if-i-met-myself-or/
23rd Nov 2019 4:34am
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14th Dec 2019 9:46am
A wonderful piece. Very nicely done. I love it.. i'm write as well so please check my site too poemtheart thank you.. :)
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