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Purple Train Driving Hippo's
The train
clatters on the tracks
travelling through my brain
made of candle wax
The driver is a hippo
he takes me where I wouldn't go
he's purple
with a funny glow
reminding me of what I shouldn't know
winding , binding , inside coves
igniting memory , lightning probes .
I am who I wasn't
and I was
what I am not
all I am is what you see
and the past should be forgot .
Don't taunt then bring
the gone into everything
anylising , scrutinising
none of it's worth realising
it's in the earth
so let it lie then
purple hippos
aren't for finding .
clatters on the tracks
travelling through my brain
made of candle wax
The driver is a hippo
he takes me where I wouldn't go
he's purple
with a funny glow
reminding me of what I shouldn't know
winding , binding , inside coves
igniting memory , lightning probes .
I am who I wasn't
and I was
what I am not
all I am is what you see
and the past should be forgot .
Don't taunt then bring
the gone into everything
anylising , scrutinising
none of it's worth realising
it's in the earth
so let it lie then
purple hippos
aren't for finding .
Written by
diddi
(StephenPaul Summerscales)
Published 26th Dec 2011
| Edited 21st Mar 2012
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Interesting...
26th Dec 2011 6:09am
re: Interesting...
26th Dec 2011 12:56pm
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26th Dec 2011 2:44pm
:D I knew it would be something more poignant. I must have had too much when I read it initially...Kidding you Paul.:D
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purple train driving hippos
Anonymous
26th Dec 2011 7:11am
a good poem paul kind of funny

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re: purple train driving hippos
26th Dec 2011 1:00pm
job
26th Dec 2011 8:09am
re: job
26th Dec 2011 1:01pm
trip
26th Dec 2011 1:55pm
sounds like a colorful trip. disorientation , confusion , paranoia, a well painted picture of a lost and troubled mind in purple
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re: trip
26th Dec 2011 2:56pm
Related to an Eagle?
26th Dec 2011 3:24pm
Both a Sting song and Don Henley's "Everything is Different Now", come to mind. Very universal appeal to anyone who has grown or changed with maturity.
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re: Related to an Eagle?
26th Dec 2011 3:46pm
Hey it's mr J how are you ? and it is a 'matured now' poem your so right there wow you got me ha ha
re: re: Related to an Eagle?
26th Dec 2011 9:25pm
Okay, thanks for asking, Can't say the same for the people around me. Everyone in Oregon seems to be depressed.
Only reason I mentioned Henley is the video made quite an impression of not only me but many of my friends who have gone through AA.
Only reason I mentioned Henley is the video made quite an impression of not only me but many of my friends who have gone through AA.
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re: re: re: Related to an Eagle?
26th Dec 2011 9:40pm
Oh I see and it's not exactly too christmassy here in Durham either , there's no snow and it's warm so the season doesn't feel right but I hear where your coming from now mr J , good to hear from you :)
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purple hippos
28th Dec 2011 00:42am
re: purple hippos
28th Dec 2011 2:14am