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Pretence
Still waters,
only surface deep
waging wars,
beneath a placid sea
Rythmatic waves
pull you off your feet
the rip tides sway
in summer waters heat
only surface deep
waging wars,
beneath a placid sea
Rythmatic waves
pull you off your feet
the rip tides sway
in summer waters heat
Published 8th Nov 2019
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10th Nov 2019 7:07pm
This is a terrific metaphor. It has depth and economy. The brevity of the piece focuses it's message, which seems to me both melancholic and very relatable. Nice work.
10th Nov 2019 9:06pm
