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It rained for 2 hours last night.
I was trying to clean my armor;
old mold had taken up residence.
I almost died from mold once,
ingested more than I thought
I could handle.
Unable to evict
I have decided to recycle
I still want to keep my
White Picket Fence
even if I have no one
to share
it with.
Published 31st Oct 2019
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Anonymous
31st Oct 2019 9:47am
A ramble of consciousness that will make anyone want to immediately shower!
But, sad. :(
But, sad. :(
31st Oct 2019 3:39pm
i was trying to make this not
so (too) sad
more of a melancholic nature
thoughtful & pensive
Maybe i need to soak in some Green Tea and skip the shower
so (too) sad
more of a melancholic nature
thoughtful & pensive
Maybe i need to soak in some Green Tea and skip the shower
31st Oct 2019 11:21am
31st Oct 2019 3:42pm
Anonymous
31st Oct 2019 1:44pm
The symbology of the white picket fence is so potent. The mind immediately sees it...even before the metaphorical imagery comes into play. Same with the armor. Something about a white picket fence draws one in, feels welcoming. Armor to protect against those with less than friendly intentions...or misplaced. This is an amazing piece, Tallen!
Anonymous
31st Oct 2019 1:50pm
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31st Oct 2019 3:37pm
emotional chess?
Hmmmmmm..........
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I've been pensive as of late and couldn't sleep until i
spilled this.
There's 2 lines missing as i forgot 'em as i was moving from bed to the keyboard.
O well..........
Hmmmmmm..........
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I've been pensive as of late and couldn't sleep until i
spilled this.
There's 2 lines missing as i forgot 'em as i was moving from bed to the keyboard.
O well..........
Your insight here is
amazing!
i am humbled
& thankful for Your wonderful share & praise, Willow
amazing!
i am humbled
& thankful for Your wonderful share & praise, Willow
31st Oct 2019 8:16pm
This is so beautifully haunting. ... I dont hold on to picket fences, but my tower is tall and there is no knight coming... should I jump?
31st Oct 2019 8:19pm
Depends on the type of armor You hold fast and grow to..........
My armor is kindness
......thank You for the kind read and comments
My armor is kindness
......thank You for the kind read and comments
Anonymous
- Edited 8th May 2020 8:45pm
31st Oct 2019 10:56pm
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1st Nov 2019 8:58am
1st Nov 2019 2:23am
Dear T,
You know what this meant to me? “I still want to keep my
White Picket Fence ” —-that even when life changes abruptly or stressors are constant, the idea of hanging on to our dreams keeps us moving forward. Might not feel like that somedays but others. Touching write! H🌷
You know what this meant to me? “I still want to keep my
White Picket Fence ” —-that even when life changes abruptly or stressors are constant, the idea of hanging on to our dreams keeps us moving forward. Might not feel like that somedays but others. Touching write! H🌷
1st Nov 2019 8:59am
