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Fallen (Blind)
I wave at you from dark
yet you can't see passed light.
You live an overshadowed life:
you're dependent.
I've been defeating demons.
They're hidden on sharp edges and
under the curl in a rug and
in staircases
for you.
The film shields your eyes
from mine and everything's an off-white,
doesn't change the way we fuck
though sometimes I wave at you from dark,
and hope you can see me through light.
You still taste the same.
yet you can't see passed light.
You live an overshadowed life:
you're dependent.
I've been defeating demons.
They're hidden on sharp edges and
under the curl in a rug and
in staircases
for you.
The film shields your eyes
from mine and everything's an off-white,
doesn't change the way we fuck
though sometimes I wave at you from dark,
and hope you can see me through light.
You still taste the same.
Published 24th Dec 2011
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24th Dec 2011 1:40pm
LA
The second stanza is a winner.
So is the last line.
The picture it paints is
light years from subtle.
Bravo
S'
p.s- Not sure about 'off white'.
I have a feeling it is off-white.
The second stanza is a winner.
So is the last line.
The picture it paints is
light years from subtle.
Bravo
S'
p.s- Not sure about 'off white'.
I have a feeling it is off-white.
24th Dec 2011 1:48pm
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