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Addicted to you
I am sitting here
Staring at my screen
Willing it to say
"you have mail"
Wtf? I have none?
Press refresh again...
Hmmm, you must be asleep
I log into DUP
To see if you are 'online'
Nope... Your name I cannot see
I must refresh my screen
At least 30 times ...
Still not there
I work on my rhymes
Can't concentrate
You are running through my head
Damn, I'm so tired
I really should go to bed
Off I go, but it doesn't matter
I am refreshing as I walk
I lie in bed listening to my music
I am sorry, I'm starting to stalk (you)
I look at the clock it is nearly 2
I sigh loudly
This really won't do
I NEED TO SLEEP!!
Drift off at last
Alarm goes off at 5
Yawn and stretch
Out of bed I dive
Log in and refresh...
A message!
So you are still thinking of me
For the rest of the day
So happy I will be :-)
You are my other addiction ...
Staring at my screen
Willing it to say
"you have mail"
Wtf? I have none?
Press refresh again...
Hmmm, you must be asleep
I log into DUP
To see if you are 'online'
Nope... Your name I cannot see
I must refresh my screen
At least 30 times ...
Still not there
I work on my rhymes
Can't concentrate
You are running through my head
Damn, I'm so tired
I really should go to bed
Off I go, but it doesn't matter
I am refreshing as I walk
I lie in bed listening to my music
I am sorry, I'm starting to stalk (you)
I look at the clock it is nearly 2
I sigh loudly
This really won't do
I NEED TO SLEEP!!
Drift off at last
Alarm goes off at 5
Yawn and stretch
Out of bed I dive
Log in and refresh...
A message!
So you are still thinking of me
For the rest of the day
So happy I will be :-)
You are my other addiction ...
Published 24th Dec 2011
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24th Dec 2011 3:53pm
As far as addictions go, it could be a lot worse! The stalking part is cute!
29th Dec 2011 8:26am
Hi Jazz,
Not really a bad addiction I guess... Thankx for your comment. So you think I am cute when I stalk you?
;-) Vixen
Not really a bad addiction I guess... Thankx for your comment. So you think I am cute when I stalk you?
;-) Vixen
Anonymous
24th Dec 2011 5:57pm
This poem was sweet...Im sure he feels the same ;)
29th Dec 2011 8:31am
Thank you milkyway,
I am sure that he does. Thankx for your post.
Cheers. Vixen ;-)
I am sure that he does. Thankx for your post.
Cheers. Vixen ;-)
I like your poems. I read your stuff often. I wanted to comment on it before. But you fill a long row of fan and commentators. Dunno why, lol. It's normal.
I have to take the appointment and get in line. You're so cheeky, funny, bright and fresh ... This site never ceases to amaze me. Hides many interesting guests.
Happy and dazed holidays wet..
I have to take the appointment and get in line. You're so cheeky, funny, bright and fresh ... This site never ceases to amaze me. Hides many interesting guests.
Happy and dazed holidays wet..
29th Dec 2011 8:40am
Thank you Luca,
I am really thrilled that you enjoy my work. I can never have too many fans, welcome aboard lol.
You are right, this site is really great, with so many different poets from all walks of life sharing different experiences.
Cheers. Vixen ;-)
I am really thrilled that you enjoy my work. I can never have too many fans, welcome aboard lol.
You are right, this site is really great, with so many different poets from all walks of life sharing different experiences.
Cheers. Vixen ;-)
Anonymous
24th Dec 2011 7:32pm
and a wonderful writer as well - you sure do know how to spark a candle without a match m'lady - for the heat you bring is quite intense - I am also certain this someone you speak of - is a very lucky man indeed - well done my dear - ^v^
29th Dec 2011 8:45am
Oh nightspirit,
Devious and wicked...me? Never!!!! ;-)
You had better believe it, he is a very lucky man!
Cheers Vixen ;-) x
Devious and wicked...me? Never!!!! ;-)
You had better believe it, he is a very lucky man!
Cheers Vixen ;-) x
24th Dec 2011 9:31pm
Good morning and Merry Christmas to you and yours vixen, well you've done it again, another top write, no wonder the world's in love with you, you Ace in lace, have a good one champ, cheers ;-) jiminy
29th Dec 2011 8:50am
Thanks Jiminy,
This one was a little different, but so true.
I don't think that the world is in love with me.. Just like a few of my poems...
And I gather that your favourite was denim and lace?
Cheers. Vixen ;-) x
This one was a little different, but so true.
I don't think that the world is in love with me.. Just like a few of my poems...
And I gather that your favourite was denim and lace?
Cheers. Vixen ;-) x
25th Dec 2011 4:40am
As to stalk it's prey
Or let it go and watch it another day
He has always responded in riddle
Even if she thought she was in the middle
Don't worry about all of the blab
To bad love... Thier is no rehab
I'm sure that he will email
For him without you
Would be a lonely hell
Aaron will keep you thinking of many things
Feeling something new as he sings
An email or an online view
You see me, but who stalks who?
DAG... You know of course
Or let it go and watch it another day
He has always responded in riddle
Even if she thought she was in the middle
Don't worry about all of the blab
To bad love... Thier is no rehab
I'm sure that he will email
For him without you
Would be a lonely hell
Aaron will keep you thinking of many things
Feeling something new as he sings
An email or an online view
You see me, but who stalks who?
DAG... You know of course
29th Dec 2011 9:09am
Thanks Atropabelladonna,
I always look forward to your comments. Pleased you enjoyed it. Cheers. Vixen ;-) x
I always look forward to your comments. Pleased you enjoyed it. Cheers. Vixen ;-) x
27th Dec 2011 9:36pm
This poem strikes a cord with me. I have been there, although not quite to the extend of the woman in your poem. And if two people think of each other often and neither of them mind then it's hardly stalking is it?
29th Dec 2011 9:16am
Hi scarletvelvet,
Thank you. But if neither of them are really sure of each other then it could be classed as mild stalking perhaps?
Thankx for posting your comment. I am really pleased that you could relate.
Cheers. Vixen ;-)
Thank you. But if neither of them are really sure of each other then it could be classed as mild stalking perhaps?
Thankx for posting your comment. I am really pleased that you could relate.
Cheers. Vixen ;-)
28th Dec 2011 6:50pm
I know most would be too scared to admit this but I know everyone, or atleast everyone who has ever had a email knows this feeling. Great connection
29th Dec 2011 10:25am
Thankx yayo2012,
Pleased you enjoyed it. Welcome to DUP.
Cheers. Vixen ;-)
Pleased you enjoyed it. Welcome to DUP.
Cheers. Vixen ;-)
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