Catori

First thing I did was google the word catori. It says that it is a native american name meaning spirit. Generally I eschew end line rhymes, but you do a good job of it, it has nice flow. I think removing the word "the" in the last line would make it flow cleaner. This was nice work. Hi I'm Daniel. Nice to meet you :)

Hi Daniel,
Thank you! This piece was in light of self liberation. My inner "Catori" had been gated for so long to become what someone wanted me to be. Releasing her felt like breathing again!
The name is inspired by the Cherokee in me. It is the perfect fit. I'm flattered that you looked it up!
Love the suggestion and definitely worth consideration.
It's very nice meeting you too Daniel !

Lots to like about this piece!

Thank you! I saw your profile briefly and see that you have published books! So this is such a compliment!

Thank you, Skipper!  (I've sent you a PM).

This is absolutely awesome!

Thank you !

She is amazing!

Thank you, This one's close to my heart