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Love And Sympathy
sucking on the tit
blinded by desire
classless wit
ignorance is fire
faith is corrupt
no fucking god
prayer ends abrupt
just another fraud
puzzle figures
unable to connect
social triggers
perpetual defect
sliding down
heart implodes
distant frown
reality explodes
love and
sympathy
devours
negativity
blinded by desire
classless wit
ignorance is fire
faith is corrupt
no fucking god
prayer ends abrupt
just another fraud
puzzle figures
unable to connect
social triggers
perpetual defect
sliding down
heart implodes
distant frown
reality explodes
love and
sympathy
devours
negativity
Published 22nd Oct 2019
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22nd Oct 2019 4:31am
Perhaps I’m being philosophical Dr X, but isn’t love superior to hate? Vitae - some might say.
At all costs avoid inciting a panic attack or confusion.
At all costs avoid inciting a panic attack or confusion.
22nd Oct 2019 10:40pm
Velvet.. interesting take.. I think love is superior to hate.. but I often think my personal demons evoke themselves in my poems.. and those are things that scare my core.. much respect..
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23rd Oct 2019 8:58pm
Love and hate - two powerful forces that drive our lives (along with fear, guilt, shame, etc, etc). In a highly manipulated and dysfunctional world, my take on hate is to articulate it without hurting anyone - better out than festering within - which I guess is what you're doing in this poem. DUP is a good place for this; it's part of what attracted me to it originally. Josh.
26th Oct 2019 00:18am
Josh.. I agree.. it's better to get the negativity out, then let it consume you.. appreciated is your commentary.. respect..
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