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Senryu #41 ...Pity ...
The pity is...
having to point out the obvious...
to the oblivious.
Written by
Ely
(E.A.Rothwell)
Published 21st Oct 2019
| Edited 13th Apr 2020
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Re. The pity is...
Anonymous
21st Oct 2019 7:15pm
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Could be...but it's not about men... it's about people...about how once it's said... it's said...and
you can't take it back... Ely
you can't take it back... Ely
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Sure, you're able to say that, dizzzzzy dear but one can't undo the damage done... by words thoughtlessly said...hugs, Ely
Re. The pity is...
21st Oct 2019 9:32pm
Point taken ... but trouble is the oblivious are especially reluctant to see the obvious - and pointing it out to them raises their hackles.
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21st Oct 2019 10:29pm
Aye...look at Trump for a fine example of the oblivious...in fact...wouldn't he well illustrate the oblivious leading the "Obliviated"
(see Harry Potter for reference) hugs, Ely
(see Harry Potter for reference) hugs, Ely
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22nd Oct 2019 2:48am
Once in a while it's good to raise a few hackles...
makes it easier to find the skin one needs to get under
Hugs... Ely
makes it easier to find the skin one needs to get under
Hugs... Ely
Re. The pity is...
21st Oct 2019 10:39pm
Well then they should say it clear. Or move the fuck over. Cause I'm coming home damn it.
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Re. The pity is...
22nd Oct 2019 00:25am
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I task myself with speaking plain...and mostly I succeed ...thanks, kitty for the moral support... it's always appreciated...hugs, Ely
Re. The pity is...
22nd Oct 2019 6:10pm
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23rd Oct 2019 9:36pm
You are quite right on that point, friend Poet...Newton's Third Law of Motion... (for every action there is an equal and opposite re-action) illustrates very well why a person cannot be saved...
not without their own participation...i.e...there's none so blind as those who will not see... hugs... Ely
not without their own participation...i.e...there's none so blind as those who will not see... hugs... Ely
Re. The pity is...
22nd Oct 2019 6:11pm