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SENRYU - FOR WANT OF AIR
A horrific scene
tires impaled on virgin nails
blessed warranty
tires impaled on virgin nails
blessed warranty
Author's Note
My tires are nail magnets.
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Re. SENRYU - FOR WANT OF AIR
17th Oct 2019 10:50pm
oh my god, that does sound scary. I'm glad you're okay.
It's such a headache to encounter car problems while on the road specially if you're going to work, but good thing you had insurance and warranty.
It's such a headache to encounter car problems while on the road specially if you're going to work, but good thing you had insurance and warranty.
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Re: Re. SENRYU - FOR WANT OF AIR
18th Oct 2019 3:41am
My first line may be a tad hyperbolic. I knew the the tires were damaged so I drove directly to the tire store...it could have been disastrous. Thank you for your concern and I appreciate the read and comment. 🙏😊
Re. SENRYU - FOR WANT OF AIR
18th Oct 2019 1:47am
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18th Oct 2019 5:57am
At the risk of seeming an overly enthusiastic metallurgist, thank you dear Titanium! Your compliment makes me want to be better. I am glad you enjoyed the piece 🙏🌷🎶
Re. SENRYU - FOR WANT OF AIR
18th Oct 2019 12:23pm
I echo Titanium. Please be more careful though. We don't need another poet down in the Underground! 🙏😉
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Re: Re. SENRYU - FOR WANT OF AIR
Yikes...the Waaaay Underground! I've decided to ride the wind and serve as nutrient rich potash when I depart. Thank you so much for the read and comment. 🙏💜
Re: Re. SENRYU - FOR WANT OF AIR
19th Oct 2019 5:58am
Haha, I was playing hypocrite anyhow. I'm sleeping with my overheated phone with the nearly busted battery ready to explode. At this point, I'm thinking whatev! Lol. No, really.. I've been pretty sad with all the missing members of our family...my heart cant take another one. 😟
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19th Oct 2019 9:02am
I guess I hadn't heard of deaths. I did hear, on the podcast, of a poet named Liam who passed. I know some who are sick. Have many others died?
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19th Oct 2019 11:54pm
No.... just missing Taryn, Bender, Diamond Dave, HF, crow and a few others..either unhappy with the site support or in HF's case, bullied by a stalker. He's supposed to eventually return. Willow has spoken about leaving too. *sigh*😶
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