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Confection Crumbs
Was there an earthquake these past 3 weeks?
I am pretty certain there was not.
Was there a flood or famine or fire?
Hmm, I think I remember arson to a parchment
or two before I left to ground my spirit.
But I am pretty sure there has been NO
earthquake,
So then, why is the (symbolic) Ivory Tower crumbling?
No orts or cookie crumbs to sweep
under the carpet.
Is that the way it
Crumbles?
You need no more Butchers only
Bakers and someone to light the way –
Hmm, perhaps a Candlestick Maker!
Then You might see where the crumbs
lay……………….
……….and rebuild and bake anew.
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Re. Confection Crumbs
17th Oct 2019 8:08am
Re: Re. Confection Crumbs
17th Oct 2019 3:24pm
i need me a Baker / Cook in my life
so i might stop
Food poisoning myself -- LOL
so i might stop
Food poisoning myself -- LOL
Anonymous
- Edited 25th Oct 2022 6:45pm
17th Oct 2019 1:18pm
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17th Oct 2019 3:25pm
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17th Oct 2019 1:19pm
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17th Oct 2019 3:27pm
i love the white and pink iced animal cookies
vs the homemade baked cookies
appreciate the kind comments
vs the homemade baked cookies
appreciate the kind comments
Anonymous
- Edited 8th May 2020 8:45pm
17th Oct 2019 2:59pm
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Re: Re. Confection Crumbs
17th Oct 2019 3:29pm
Stole a crumb?
the tower might or might not crumble
as the Jenga Tower is being retro-fitted
but yeah, sooner or later towers crumble
only to be rebuilt and made better
the tower might or might not crumble
as the Jenga Tower is being retro-fitted
but yeah, sooner or later towers crumble
only to be rebuilt and made better
Re. Confection Crumbs
Woah wow had to read it twice to get what you saying, which is super clever. You mean what crumbles cakes without earthquakes yeahh so more will be baked. Better the cakes crumble and pie crust than the Earth's crust crack n crumble.. Kudos!
Pls pleez do comment/ write down your thoughts on my newest poem too. Without such thought exchange interaction we would be in monologue merely.
Pls pleez do comment/ write down your thoughts on my newest poem too. Without such thought exchange interaction we would be in monologue merely.
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Re: Re. Confection Crumbs
19th Oct 2019 7:05am
we writers are the Bakers
appreciate You stopping by to read
and the interesting comments
appreciate You stopping by to read
and the interesting comments
Re: Re. Confection Crumbs
19th Oct 2019 8:46am
Oh yes you bake fine poetry ESP. My comment had typos so I modified it.
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Re. Confection Crumbs
19th Oct 2019 3:22am
Dear T,
After my mouth stopped watering for cakes and cookies I felt as though you might be referencing something else with the underground. I’m sure I’m way off, and I want chocolate chip cookies and chocolate cake please. H🌷
After my mouth stopped watering for cakes and cookies I felt as though you might be referencing something else with the underground. I’m sure I’m way off, and I want chocolate chip cookies and chocolate cake please. H🌷
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Re: Re. Confection Crumbs
19th Oct 2019 7:03am
I am -- LOL
but sweets are always welcomed
when sharing kindness
appreciate the wonderful share
but sweets are always welcomed
when sharing kindness
appreciate the wonderful share
Re. Confection Crumbs
Anonymous
22nd Oct 2019 2:25pm
It's a cycle thing...one thing ends and another begins. I'm not a baker but I make a mean cheesecake. This one made me smile this morning :-)
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Re: Re. Confection Crumbs
22nd Oct 2019 5:46pm
Mmmmmm, my Favorite type of cake!!
I am partial to Blueberry Cheesecake : )
Delighted i cause some smiling
I am partial to Blueberry Cheesecake : )
Delighted i cause some smiling
Re. Confection Crumbs
Anonymous
- Edited 6th Nov 2019 3:05pm
6th Nov 2019 3:04pm
I always felt sorry for the Cookie Monster.
That unquenchable desire for cookies and yet,....not the taste buds to enjoy them, the throat to swallow them nor the stomach to digest them.
That unquenchable desire for cookies and yet,....not the taste buds to enjoy them, the throat to swallow them nor the stomach to digest them.
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Re: Re. Confection Crumbs
6th Nov 2019 7:34pm
It IS A PROBLEM
when one never takes the time to develop the skills
to hear, listen and feel
appreciate Your read and share
when one never takes the time to develop the skills
to hear, listen and feel
appreciate Your read and share
Re. Confection Crumbs
Anonymous
- Edited 6th Nov 2019 8:41pm
6th Nov 2019 8:37pm
I think, personally...it is MORE OF A PROBLEM..
When one fails to experience the light of observational interpretation alluding to a memory being shared regardless of subject...
Because one is so conceited and so very far up one's own arse...that one fails to develop the skills to hear, listen and feel anything outside of one's own musings!
In my humble opinion. It's just a shame.
When one fails to experience the light of observational interpretation alluding to a memory being shared regardless of subject...
Because one is so conceited and so very far up one's own arse...that one fails to develop the skills to hear, listen and feel anything outside of one's own musings!
In my humble opinion. It's just a shame.
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6th Nov 2019 8:41pm
Re. Confection Crumbs
Anonymous
6th Nov 2019 8:43pm
Absolutely welcome.👍👍
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Re. Confection Crumbs
7th Dec 2019 3:28am
Personally I think when one learns to make things private instead of a show they are putting on then maybe they would get the right response
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