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your fate
living is an art thats not always well painted
the lines are dirty and the brushes are all tainted
with deception and lies that the devil creates
but you alone can change your fate
so find someone that you love or despise
make life worth living and worth the rise
piss the devil off by enjoying what you have
he hates nothing more then to just see you laugh.........
the lines are dirty and the brushes are all tainted
with deception and lies that the devil creates
but you alone can change your fate
so find someone that you love or despise
make life worth living and worth the rise
piss the devil off by enjoying what you have
he hates nothing more then to just see you laugh.........
Published 23rd Dec 2011
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25th Dec 2011 11:45am
i liked ur write . it is a piece of succint rhymed wisdom. fine.it should be (than) in your last line instead of (then)
28th Dec 2011 6:55pm
This is simple but yet so complex in a way my favorite line was "so find someone that you love or despise" making sure we have at least one thing to live for is life.
17th Jul 2012 6:45am
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