Glamourless

VERY SEXY INDEED...

Glad you enjoyed sir

i truly enjoy reading your spoken words...one love with respect

Really thought this was awesome all around. Great job.

Thank you

So eloquently placed and paced.

I may be putting too much thought into simple mechanics

No no.  That thought process is right on track.  ;)

Thank you for that confirming perspective - I try to be evocative rather than just descriptive

You do both very well.

Thank you for the compliment

I get a real sense of imagery in this poem. You obviously write from experience. This is good erotica.

Painting pictures that can be enjoyed is fun

The perfect erotic physique poem. You use your poetic brush to grand effect here. And I must confess to my burgeoning manliness under your spell. ;-)

XoXoXo
John

The mouth will just have
to open wider to fit
your immensity

as always a delicious rhyming experience...

I enjoy delicious rhyming and am glad you do too

I've noticed a theme of late :)

You have sir?  Do share?  I hope it is not getting tired and overused.

Dope