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Hunger Games
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Hunger Games
Written by
SweetOblivion
Published
17th Oct 2019
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Re. Hunger Games
Tenderloin
17th Oct 2019 12:28pm
"Soft cries are not complaints; I want much more;"
The consensual thrill of this line beautifully illustrates the hunger in which you speak of.
I enjoyed how the conclusion dismisses the games in favour of...
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Re: Re. Hunger Games
SweetOblivion
- Edited 18th Oct 2019 1:33am
18th Oct 2019 1:31am
there are games and games sir. I think the first couplet was laid down further to some recent banter between us - glad you liked the finished product.
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Re: Re. Hunger Games
Tenderloin
18th Oct 2019 2:41am
I certainly did. And if it was a result of some shared banter...even more appealing ;)
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Re. Hunger Games
Stoney223
(WOLF BAY33)
17th Oct 2019 1:39pm
LOVED THIS PIECE...RESPECT TO THE PEN
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Re: Re. Hunger Games
SweetOblivion
18th Oct 2019 1:34am
Glad you enjoyed and even more so that you shared your enjoyment sir
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Stoney223
(WOLF BAY33)
18th Oct 2019 11:25am
you are very welcome QUEEN...one love with respect
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Re. Hunger Games
goldenmyst
22nd Oct 2019 12:23pm
Genuine hunger expressed with authentic feelings is where it is at. You cut a path to heavenly copulation and I enjoyed riding your poem. ;)
XoXoXo
John
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