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Softest Sorrow
I am the softest sorrow
I am the one you want to forget
but yet the one you can’t live without
I am the bittersweet
I swept you of your feet
but in my haste I hurt you
I am the one who loves you the most
I never meant to hurt you
Things never workout the way I want them too
I am the one who will fix my mistakes
And make you happier than you could believe
I am the one who will forever love you
I am the one you want to forget
but yet the one you can’t live without
I am the bittersweet
I swept you of your feet
but in my haste I hurt you
I am the one who loves you the most
I never meant to hurt you
Things never workout the way I want them too
I am the one who will fix my mistakes
And make you happier than you could believe
I am the one who will forever love you
Published 22nd Dec 2011
| Edited 23rd Dec 2011
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My favorite lines:
'I swept you off your feet'
'but in my haste I hurt you'
Thanks for sharing:)
'I swept you off your feet'
'but in my haste I hurt you'
Thanks for sharing:)
22nd Dec 2011 5:30pm
Anonymous
22nd Dec 2011 9:40pm
a good write levi kind of sad frist loves always hurt the most...thank you for your comment on old st nick
22nd Dec 2011 9:44pm
25th Dec 2011 5:28am
This is an amazing poem.
I really love this.
The first two stanzas remind of someone and then the last two remind me of myself :/
I really love this.
The first two stanzas remind of someone and then the last two remind me of myself :/
25th Dec 2011 2:38pm
