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Wind Scent
I rave at the dividing line
The dividing time
It’s latitude and longitude
That part our skies and form our seas
I rave at the dividing line
The land and high tides
Neither will divide our ways
Or our emergence in its primordial line
We are to be set free in time.
The dividing time
It’s latitude and longitude
That part our skies and form our seas
I rave at the dividing line
The land and high tides
Neither will divide our ways
Or our emergence in its primordial line
We are to be set free in time.
Published 11th Oct 2019
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13th Oct 2019 00:30am
Hm. Makes me think perhaps of a long distance relationship. Nice syllabic harmony. I might expand a bit and slow it down, but my writes are often lengthy.
26th Dec 2019 11:02pm
I have missed so many comments, Daniel thank you for the advice. I often fail to stop and breathe in the rush to transpose the thought.
19th Oct 2019 4:58am
I must agree with David...definite long distant relationship trials. With the rave, not far behind comes the ravishing..ending distances torments.. Felt write Q.🌺
26th Dec 2019 11:03pm
D, I find hope in your words thank you. How ever long the journey the end I hope will be just that. Thank you.
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- Edited 6th Jan 2020 5:45pm
21st Dec 2019 8:26pm
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