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Weekend Sundress
Excited
to see you
for the weekend.
I guess you didn't follow me
into the kitchen for a glass of water.
Warm hands sneak around me.
They tickle
my thighs on the way up
my dress,
And tear off
the lace
on the way
down.
I like
the way
you lift me up
and carry
me away as
I wrap
my legs
around your waist.
to see you
for the weekend.
I guess you didn't follow me
into the kitchen for a glass of water.
Warm hands sneak around me.
They tickle
my thighs on the way up
my dress,
And tear off
the lace
on the way
down.
I like
the way
you lift me up
and carry
me away as
I wrap
my legs
around your waist.
Published 22nd Dec 2011
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Anonymous
22nd Dec 2011 5:36am
I like how you make this one light and airy, like the summer breeze under that dress. Nothing heavy, just lift you up and carry you off...Cool read.
tornado
tornado
22nd Dec 2011 5:44am
Yes, it's nice to get carried away in something nice and sweet. Thanks for reading :)
22nd Dec 2011 6:13am
22nd Dec 2011 2:45pm
Anonymous
22nd Dec 2011 6:20am
I love this... You know good girl you are one of the minority writers here who write erotic poetry not porn and I respect you for that.
Well done on this.
Al -x-
Well done on this.
Al -x-
22nd Dec 2011 11:57am
Thank you. That is a great compliment. I think suggestive is better than dirty. The dirty stuff just makes me laugh.
-GGH
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