Pure Magic

i like how your words touches the mind as well as the soul for each word holds you as one experience the magic of the flow of words...nicely composed QUEEN

I fear they might be too misted in the image though - maybe I need to review?

this is just a subjection...chose a color background or color print that doesn't make the words hard to see but to me it is still a beautiful piece that has been composed very lovely

I think this is maybe better, yes?

yes that is much better dear soul...sometimes when we write upon colors its best to have the writing stand out from the background so as no to lost the message in the writing...

I should hate to be
lost in a mist all of my
own making, you know

i can relate to that statement sometimes it better to see it through other eyes for they see what we cant see in our writings that's why it is good to reread what we wrote as writers for as a writer we want our readers to journey with us as we travel through our own minds from pen to paper...

whis...p also conjures mists maybe and magic - will of the wisp

That was quite the turning.  Lovely way to spend time in the mist.

It is good to look
out, when someone pushes in:
so, no missed turning

Clearly, you are versed in the rules of conduct.  ;)

An erotically charged romance of misty eyed acceptance of the moment. You certainly succumbed with panache. ;) John