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abyss
she had the abyss in her hand
she couldn't handle this glass
you could hear the flip flops
and the pieces as they scattered around
she couldn't handle this glass
you could hear the flip flops
and the pieces as they scattered around
Published 26th Sep 2019
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3rd Oct 2019 7:01pm
The brevity of the write, the economy of it's details, combine to create a strong image. Nicely done.
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Welcome to the site. I hope you will enjoy your time with us here. There are many wonderful writers to interact with.
Please check out the site podcast, The Poetcast Project.
If you are interested in some positive and helpful feedback, join us in the group Cafe Critique.
In kindness,
Daniel
9th Oct 2019 4:55pm
9th Oct 2019 4:58pm
Hi a_methyste
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9th Oct 2019 6:43pm
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