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Would You...
Before we continue...
I need to know first
If it got hot and heavy
Would you control your thirst?
If I laid next to you
And cuddled up close
Would you simply hug me
Or would you trace my pantyhose
If I kissed you deep and soft
And said not to touch my breasts
Just my thighs, back, and head
Would your hands linger instead?
Would you stop, baby
If I simply asked you to
Even as my tongue
Laps and sticks to yours like glue
Would you
Have control
Enough to follow the rules
Or
Would you
Tongue the clit, baby
Sloppily with running drool
Would you stop
Even if your mouth was full
Yearning for a taste...
Would you stop, baby
Would you?
I need to know first
If it got hot and heavy
Would you control your thirst?
If I laid next to you
And cuddled up close
Would you simply hug me
Or would you trace my pantyhose
If I kissed you deep and soft
And said not to touch my breasts
Just my thighs, back, and head
Would your hands linger instead?
Would you stop, baby
If I simply asked you to
Even as my tongue
Laps and sticks to yours like glue
Would you
Have control
Enough to follow the rules
Or
Would you
Tongue the clit, baby
Sloppily with running drool
Would you stop
Even if your mouth was full
Yearning for a taste...
Would you stop, baby
Would you?
Published 26th Sep 2019
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26th Sep 2019 00:19am
TO RESPECT A WOMAN YOU HAVE TO RESPECT HER GENTLE REQUEST FOR WHEN ITS TIME SHE WILL TELL YOU AS SHE WILL SHOW WERE TO TOUCH AND KISS...FOR YOU HAVE TO RESPECT THE WOMAN FIRST TO GRANT YOU A BEAUTIFUL WISH OF TOUCHING THE PURE ESSENCE THAT SHE HAS TO GIVE WITH BLESSING AND BLISSFULNESS...WOULD I THE ANSWER IS YES
OMG you're blowing my mind stoney haha. Just the confession that you would restrain your ambition to await a lady's wholehearted concession just makes all the difference in those situations... The restraint shows where you're at homie :) I likes it! You almost have a piece there lol.
27th Sep 2019 7:47pm
thank you for the comment and yes to respect a woman one must respect thyself in the process for if is to happen there must be a understand for each space done only by respect...for eyes don't lie what the mouth wish to confess out of respect
26th Sep 2019 00:44am
echo Stoney
if the man loves her he do as ask even if wish not that is a man truly in love
if the man loves her he do as ask even if wish not that is a man truly in love
26th Sep 2019 1:01am
So true NB, and yes I think Stoney shed the best light on this subject! Touche to you both, true gentleman :)
26th Sep 2019 1:18am
26th Sep 2019 1:26am
Anonymous
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26th Sep 2019 1:00am
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Thank you, she's feisty like me ;) and they were meant to be seductive love I'm glad you enjoyed :)
26th Sep 2019 1:14am
Hypothetically it is easy to answer this with words. Two fires burning side by side will find it difficult to not become one. It is best answered in the morning if you both survive the night. Tight
26th Sep 2019 1:23am
Not just simple words. If a man can show restraint enough to wait for the riches, to respect her wishes, the rewards will be plentyful :)
26th Sep 2019 1:27am
Her wish may change at anytime during the night if you are going against her wishes it's not love its rape
26th Sep 2019 1:35am
There are ways to persuade when it is not her wish for things to move that quickly. lust overcomes basic sense and after it is gone and all is spent the worst thing is to wake up with regret. I would rather know what I want before any trist to avoid getting lost when I'm not ready to be.
Anonymous
26th Sep 2019 1:30am
could I?...would I?...I'm not that rapy kind of guy... better question, why not try? lay here and spread those thighs and see with your own eyes! Yeah, just like that!!!
26th Sep 2019 1:38am
Haha I know you'd try. I'd end up whippin ya ass up and down these hallways :)
Anonymous
26th Sep 2019 2:17pm
Nah, it would never go that far...As I said, I'm not that of that rappish nature....but unlike most, manly truthful in behavior!!...Yeah, just like that!!!
26th Sep 2019 6:56am
I agree with your comments to Stoney 223 and I IS ME. This poem is a challenge to not rush into sex but take time and follow what she says.
26th Sep 2019 7:01am
Our point exactly :) it is good to know there are patient ones among us. Thanks for stopping by Solomon ;)
2nd Oct 2019 2:55am
Would you control your thirst!!
A very deep question that most people can't answer
A very deep question that most people can't answer
2nd Oct 2019 2:00pm
Anonymous
14th Feb 2020 8:10pm
Hell no, I wouldn't stop. Very hot and heavy. Love this.
17th Feb 2020 5:26am
