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Autumn
Clouded beneath cloudless skies
No grand designs or erotic inclines
Drawn between the branches of spires
An echo of a song
A canopy of whispers to lead you on
Through a sun dappled shadows trail
To rivers hung in the mornings sun
An esoteric joy to simply be
Amongst the first of falling Autumn’s leaves
And all the reason I now recall
It is by connection we build projection
And where to place our feet to fall
No grand designs or erotic inclines
Drawn between the branches of spires
An echo of a song
A canopy of whispers to lead you on
Through a sun dappled shadows trail
To rivers hung in the mornings sun
An esoteric joy to simply be
Amongst the first of falling Autumn’s leaves
And all the reason I now recall
It is by connection we build projection
And where to place our feet to fall
Published 25th Sep 2019
Author's Note
Being in the presence of nature. (This is the first time doing a poem in this format)
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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25th Sep 2019 11:46pm
Beautiful poem and your reading lends great dimension to the write. Welcome to the site, if you are unfamiliar. If you'd like some positive and helpful feedback, join us in the group Cafe Critique.
If you would like us to feature this poem in an upcoming episode of the site's podcast, The Poetcast Project, please send an audio file to:
undergroundoutloud@outlook.com
It would introduce your writing to the members who listen and hopefully forge some new friendships. :)
In kindness,
Daniel
If you would like us to feature this poem in an upcoming episode of the site's podcast, The Poetcast Project, please send an audio file to:
undergroundoutloud@outlook.com
It would introduce your writing to the members who listen and hopefully forge some new friendships. :)
In kindness,
Daniel
26th Sep 2019 10:44am
Daniel,
Thank you for your sentiment.
This is my first time on DU and will gladly take up your offer to join Café Critique.
It would also be a pleasure to be included in the Poetcast Project and as you say, hopefully forge some new friendships - a particularly apt turn of phrase being a blacksmith amongst other callings.
Until the next,
Q.
Thank you for your sentiment.
This is my first time on DU and will gladly take up your offer to join Café Critique.
It would also be a pleasure to be included in the Poetcast Project and as you say, hopefully forge some new friendships - a particularly apt turn of phrase being a blacksmith amongst other callings.
Until the next,
Q.
26th Sep 2019 00:31am
This is a great piece of poetry...a painting of delightful words.
Cheers...Harry
Cheers...Harry
26th Sep 2019 10:58am
Hello Harry,
I can take no credit for the canvas I was given, it's a pity the video I took on location had to be dropped but at least the words found their place. Thank you for sharing in the journey.
I can take no credit for the canvas I was given, it's a pity the video I took on location had to be dropped but at least the words found their place. Thank you for sharing in the journey.
