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In The Eye of a Storm
for the longest time
we've been stuck in this hurricane
in the eye
we assumed the worst was now behind us
but we were fooled
by the quiet
believing all was well
before we watched it get destroyed
we've been stuck in this hurricane
in the eye
we assumed the worst was now behind us
but we were fooled
by the quiet
believing all was well
before we watched it get destroyed
Published 24th Sep 2019
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- Edited 21st Oct 2019 5:45am
24th Sep 2019 11:51am
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24th Sep 2019 12:37pm
Exactly, haha! Tragic. But it sure makes for good short poems like these.
Thank you so much, HF. In writing this is usually what I am aiming for, it's nice to hear that it does come across that way. :)
And thanks for the add to your reading list!
Delanee.
Thank you so much, HF. In writing this is usually what I am aiming for, it's nice to hear that it does come across that way. :)
And thanks for the add to your reading list!
Delanee.
25th Sep 2019 3:48am
24th Oct 2019 2:53pm
in the storm we can not see only when it clears is the truth be known
sweet work
sweet work
