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fidelity
it was either
suicide or
you that
night babe...
...sadly,
I chose
you...
because
suicide never
would have
left me
in the
morning
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Re. fidelity
24th Sep 2019 3:14am
Re: Re. fidelity
24th Sep 2019 3:20am
Thank you Ahvanti. This one goes back to when i was in college (in the 1970's...ahem). I was better looking then, but im much smarter now 😎.
luv's,
buddhakitty.
luv's,
buddhakitty.
Re: Re. fidelity
24th Sep 2019 3:21am
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Re: Re. fidelity
24th Sep 2019 12:31pm
Re. fidelity
24th Sep 2019 1:47pm
Re: Re. fidelity
24th Sep 2019 2:59pm
Re. fidelity
24th Sep 2019 8:25pm
A bit of a brutal choice - but your decision means you're still alive - and gracing DUP with wonderful writes :))
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Re: Re. fidelity
24th Sep 2019 11:11pm
Thank you Josh. That was based on an experience from my foolish youth. I am much wiser now .
hugs,
buddhakitty.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
Re: Re. fidelity
24th Sep 2019 11:18pm
Who hasn't had a foolish youth? But like you, I'm hopefully more wise rather than merely older & more senile :))
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Re. fidelity
25th Sep 2019 11:28pm
Ah the existential choices that we humans can never escape...as de Beauvoir said...even not choosing is a choice, I'm glad you were here to write this poem Kitty.
Cheers...Harry
Cheers...Harry
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Re: Re. fidelity
25th Sep 2019 11:46pm
Part of my foolish youth lol. Thank you Harry. It is good to be here knowing there are individuals like youself still fighting the good fight.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
Re. fidelity
26th Sep 2019 4:13am
Dear BK,
Living a parallel experience on this one dear poetess. I’m glad you chose wisely and are here to share your story!! Excellent description of thought and experience in so few words!
H 🌷
Living a parallel experience on this one dear poetess. I’m glad you chose wisely and are here to share your story!! Excellent description of thought and experience in so few words!
H 🌷
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Re: Re. fidelity
26th Sep 2019 4:35am
Thank you Honoria. I couldn't think of a better place to be than here on DUP with you.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
Re. fidelity
28th Sep 2019 11:36am
I too must agree with the other poets... You are a sweet poet that the world needs to know and read. I look forward to reading more! Aloha
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Re: Re. fidelity
28th Sep 2019 5:14pm
Words can not accurately express my gratitude for your recognition of my work.
All im left to say is thank you.
100 hugs,
buddhakitty.
All im left to say is thank you.
100 hugs,
buddhakitty.