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Who Am I?
In truths search
I've become lies.
Neglected myself
just simple betrayal.
I only ask...
Who Am I?
I was in search of something
very deep inside,
when I decided to write this rhyme.
Someone please help!
Who Am I?
Not enough time spent seeking
honesty within.
But so prompt on tweaking
who I claimed to have been.
Layers peeling away
Make-up streaking.
I AM peeking - through.
Can't fake it!
My soul is bleeding.
I AM deep
within thoughts and emotions.
*Weeping*
It's my fault.
I AM broken.
Take caution.
I AM my own Masterpiece.
Who knew......
Finally!
Cherry_Blossom released.
Published 20th Dec 2011
| Edited 14th Sep 2012
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Anonymous
- Edited 21st Dec 2011 5:24am
20th Dec 2011 9:02pm
every minute I waited to read this piece. Its a perfectly crafted art work. Well done sweet deep Miss Blossom!
20th Dec 2011 9:24pm
*blushing*
Al,
I am delighted that I came through the way you expected :)
Thank you for believing that I had it in me lol
~hugs~
Al,
I am delighted that I came through the way you expected :)
Thank you for believing that I had it in me lol
~hugs~
Anonymous
20th Dec 2011 11:14pm
it is good you see yourself as a masterpiece - me I am a piece of dead drift wood floating out in the middle of the ocean - this was a fun little piece to read - thanks for sharing - ^v^
21st Dec 2011 00:15am
Thank you :)
There is a masterpiece in anything if you look deep within.
There is a masterpiece in anything if you look deep within.
22nd Dec 2011 6:02pm
22nd Dec 2011 7:06pm
29th Dec 2011 11:46pm
You see yourself as broken
You see yourself as a masterpiece
Beautifuly written on the good and bad
I loved it
You see yourself as a masterpiece
Beautifuly written on the good and bad
I loved it
5th Jan 2012 8:49pm
5th Jan 2012 6:44am
AMAZING!! i havent posted a poem yet but this is very encouraging. i can only hope when i do they can be just as beautiful as your piece.
5th Jan 2012 8:51pm
:) I am honored to be able to encourage you.
I am sure your work will be AMAZING!!
Looking forward to checking out your work :)
I am sure your work will be AMAZING!!
Looking forward to checking out your work :)
Anonymous
6th Jan 2012 4:15am
that poem was sick
7th Jan 2012 9:34am
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15th Jan 2012 2:45am
yeah,its actually quite good.
to be honest i wasn't sold on your use of punctuation at first, but in fairness in the context of the content it works really well.
fair play to you Cherry, you bought something original to the table.
good stuff! shine on!
to be honest i wasn't sold on your use of punctuation at first, but in fairness in the context of the content it works really well.
fair play to you Cherry, you bought something original to the table.
good stuff! shine on!
15th Jan 2012 1:20pm
Eamon,
I am glad that you liked this piece, it is very personal.
Thank you for giving it a chance. :)
I am glad that you liked this piece, it is very personal.
Thank you for giving it a chance. :)
29th Jan 2012 8:13pm
I really like this, its beautiful, and pure, bit also raw at the same time. Luv it
30th Jan 2012 6:18am
Anonymous
1st Jan 2013 9:00pm
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13th Aug 2014 5:38pm
Great write, Cherry! Though, it seems to me that you have found yourself...maybe this write helped you to do that?
25th May 2015 11:16pm
Introspective poems are my favorite kind of poem! We are born a work of art and life chisels away from the outside in as we sculpt ourselves into the masterpiece we were meant to be. Excellent artwork comes naturally from an artist such as thee... jj
16th Jun 2015 3:40pm
Not everyone is truthful to themselves. Some of us picture ourselves as who we want to be and not who we really are. Enjoyed.
