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Priceless
Simple thoughts
amid gallant gestures
arousing the sentiment of senses
more than just money could buy
my love
a never ending gift
caressing winds and
seducing the streams
chasing all the blues away
well endowed
a necklass of need
wrapped around heartsrrings
playing gently within ev'ry breeze
at ease, the sway of your trees
dropping precious leaves
guiding me to where you breathe,
you love, you live
mixing what you give
matching exquisitely
these hand made beads
not costing very much
purely priceless, indeed
amid gallant gestures
arousing the sentiment of senses
more than just money could buy
my love
a never ending gift
caressing winds and
seducing the streams
chasing all the blues away
well endowed
a necklass of need
wrapped around heartsrrings
playing gently within ev'ry breeze
at ease, the sway of your trees
dropping precious leaves
guiding me to where you breathe,
you love, you live
mixing what you give
matching exquisitely
these hand made beads
not costing very much
purely priceless, indeed
Published 22nd Sep 2019
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22nd Sep 2019 7:18pm
Gorgeous metaphors, Brother
(i always have a soft spot for Tree related metaphors)
Damnit romantic spill -- Ooooooooooo.........had me swooning
(i always have a soft spot for Tree related metaphors)
Damnit romantic spill -- Ooooooooooo.........had me swooning
23rd Sep 2019 5:18am
24th Sep 2019 2:11pm
you love, you live
^^^^^
has there ever been more truth so beautifully & eloquently written.
adore this, Tim
^^^^^
has there ever been more truth so beautifully & eloquently written.
adore this, Tim
