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Dying
We all die, we all die
not just life but moments
hearts die, friendships die
shall we mourn, shall we cry
I don't know, I don't know why
the moments many,
some just costly mistakes
each path we have choosen
or step that we take...
can't move backward
or freeze out the time
but still we all die
we die a little inside
my mind's just a window
fogged up, shut tight
I wonder what's out there
beyond this darkness of night
I blink, it's blank
I crave to go back
reliving the memories
before it goes black
not just life but moments
hearts die, friendships die
shall we mourn, shall we cry
I don't know, I don't know why
the moments many,
some just costly mistakes
each path we have choosen
or step that we take...
can't move backward
or freeze out the time
but still we all die
we die a little inside
my mind's just a window
fogged up, shut tight
I wonder what's out there
beyond this darkness of night
I blink, it's blank
I crave to go back
reliving the memories
before it goes black
Published 20th Sep 2019
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20th Sep 2019 7:26pm
More ugly crying poetry this am. The only universe is making sure i get the feels today. Lots of tear jerkers or bleak ink that n fromy of me today. 💙 ya buddy!
-Minx❣
-Minx❣
20th Sep 2019 7:35pm
expression Tim.
such beautiful delivery of a subject that truly we dwell so little on despite the certainty of it.
the last stanza is just close to home!!
such beautiful delivery of a subject that truly we dwell so little on despite the certainty of it.
the last stanza is just close to home!!
20th Sep 2019 9:44pm
this spill finds me in a fighting state of mind
as i don't want to go out or be dying
with out a fight
as i don't want to go out or be dying
with out a fight
20th Sep 2019 9:48pm
Yeah we all dying breeds, we all slowly fade and die away...
This is an awesome write
This is an awesome write
20th Sep 2019 10:45pm
Those memories may be all we have upon departure. I hope yours shine through the encroaching darkness. Wonderful write.
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23rd Sep 2019 4:55pm
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Anonymous
24th Sep 2019 2:34pm
HF said the thought that immediately came to my mind reading this. Birth and death are inextricably linked. Cannot have one without the other. But the span in between...how much can we fill it with?
