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Emotional Tourette’s
I blame you,
Come here, let me whisper softly in your ear
You have plagued me with this disease
Allow me to confess all that i feel
Suffering from Emotional Tourette’s
Permit me to submit to your whims
I guess this is what it feels like
Come here, caress my back
I have ADD
Fully saturated with devotion
Scattered thoughts
I’m unfocused
Fill me to the brim
Or overflow if you like…
Spewing random feelings
I want to give you a life
I am feigning for you
Give birth to a piece of you and i
In physical pain with all this longing
Imagine how angry the demigods will be
Heart races at the thought
Of a piece of you
Growing within me
we could name her
Lilith
This oxygen seemed laced
First of her kind
Pure love
Enticing my taste buds
Pure light
Seducing my senses
Pure energy
Purely you
Purely me
Come here, let me whisper softly in your ear
You have plagued me with this disease
Allow me to confess all that i feel
Suffering from Emotional Tourette’s
Permit me to submit to your whims
I guess this is what it feels like
Come here, caress my back
I have ADD
Fully saturated with devotion
Scattered thoughts
I’m unfocused
Fill me to the brim
Or overflow if you like…
Spewing random feelings
I want to give you a life
I am feigning for you
Give birth to a piece of you and i
In physical pain with all this longing
Imagine how angry the demigods will be
Heart races at the thought
Of a piece of you
Growing within me
we could name her
Lilith
This oxygen seemed laced
First of her kind
Pure love
Enticing my taste buds
Pure light
Seducing my senses
Pure energy
Purely you
Purely me
Published 20th Sep 2019
Author's Note
I've been playing with for a while 3 poems in one. Your honest thoughts of the concept and execution please and thank you.
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20th Sep 2019 4:50pm
i love the flow of your words a story of two souls and a gift of birth nicely combined from three sides her side his and the baby side...beautifully composed
20th Sep 2019 5:15pm
20th Sep 2019 5:38pm
I cant even begin to say how amazing you did. Your talent as a writer is superior. I tip my hat but i must say i have to stand at ovation. Wow
20th Sep 2019 6:31pm
This is clearly two separate poems ( bolded & not ) interlaced to read as one.
I read each one twice and I think it's fabulous what you've done and how you did it. Yin and Yang entwined.
Happy to sense your energy has returned to a higher level, Jen. Thought I was going to have to find you and bring a bottle of something. 🍷🙍
I read each one twice and I think it's fabulous what you've done and how you did it. Yin and Yang entwined.
Happy to sense your energy has returned to a higher level, Jen. Thought I was going to have to find you and bring a bottle of something. 🍷🙍
20th Sep 2019 9:52pm
20th Sep 2019 10:30pm
Scattered thoughts
I’m unfocused
Fill me to the brim
Or overflow if you like…
Spewing random feelings
I want to give you a life
I am feigning for you
Our intent versus our actions are everything..
It’s funny once our emotions runneth over, everything else gets blurry.
I loved this.
Yours,
Losty
I’m unfocused
Fill me to the brim
Or overflow if you like…
Spewing random feelings
I want to give you a life
I am feigning for you
Our intent versus our actions are everything..
It’s funny once our emotions runneth over, everything else gets blurry.
I loved this.
Yours,
Losty
21st Sep 2019 1:23am
Now this is interesting
Had to read it twice
Didn't realize that the bold and regular font were each separate poems because they merged smoothly together
Actually thought the bold print was used to emphasize a specific point
But it is masterful
And moving
Had to read it twice
Didn't realize that the bold and regular font were each separate poems because they merged smoothly together
Actually thought the bold print was used to emphasize a specific point
But it is masterful
And moving
