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couplet rhyme...

she forgets...
forgets the love that she once had...
confusion sucking the life out of her....
she feels weak..
weak from all the labor and hard work....
falling to her knees and holding her self tight...
wondering, is this right??
her mind in a vortex of thoughts that spirals around a dozen times..
dissolving in a couplet rhyme...
she cry...
she shuffles to find that place..
a place of happiness,fun and smiles..
but she gets weak..ill...
she die out from weariness...
disappointed in the life she has created...
a monster...
believing the exhaustion is from her losing her love...
but only to find out that its from loosing herself....
closing her eyes to believe that one day it will end.
her mind in a cyclone of thoughts that twists around a dozen times..
dissolving.. in a couplet rhyme...


-Kumiko Yamamoto
Written by AlexnEmoLand (RevolutionOfAlex)
Published | Edited 7th Jul 2012
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