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elysian impinging
In the sultry skin-hot evening
Selene rose in Her fullness
& Glory beaming
over the desert beach
where the arid sea bore
no wet
Textile worshippers clothed
among us Pagan Witches --
they transgress with sweat
covered thatch & tissue
tumbling over one another
with the grace of a tavern
sop
We will not allow these
Interlopers to spoil our fun
our ritual to our Goddess
No, they will not topple
over our rites
No trampling upon tenets
Selene’s shine and magick
Is near
though She doesn’t twinkle
Her dreams penetrate us all
moreso during this Full moon
of a 13th Friday night
this is a great night for cleansing
or charging our Talisman of
protection
Later I will typeset this
Energy
Frequency
Honor & memory
Printing upon my heart
for future
meditation.
Written by
Tallen
(earth_empath)
Published 12th Sep 2019
Author's Note
Through The Alphabet--The Letter "T"
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Re. elysian impinging
12th Sep 2019 11:50pm
Excellent, Tallen! I am getting my fool moon trays ready too!
Best of luck in the comp - this is definitely a winner in my book!
Best of luck in the comp - this is definitely a winner in my book!
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Re: Re. elysian impinging
13th Sep 2019 00:07am
Wow! I forgot that You honor Selene when She is Full and gracing us with her Presence and magick.
Delighted You liked this spill
and Honored for the RL add
I already made moon water the last full moon
and so this one tomorrow will be for
Blessings, Praising and thankfulness.
I won't be Skyclad, though, as i don't think the
elder neighbors and the night time beasties can
handle it................yet ; )
Delighted You liked this spill
and Honored for the RL add
I already made moon water the last full moon
and so this one tomorrow will be for
Blessings, Praising and thankfulness.
I won't be Skyclad, though, as i don't think the
elder neighbors and the night time beasties can
handle it................yet ; )
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Re: Re. elysian impinging
Very appreciative of Your read and sharing with me
thank You
for the kind praise
Honored for the RL add
thank You
for the kind praise
Honored for the RL add
Re. elysian impinging
13th Sep 2019 3:20pm
Great that you worked in the Friday-13th-full-moon element (won't happen again until 2040something apparently).
Love the story element running through and build-up of the cycle.
Evening/beaming = innovative half-rhyme - I like this.
Love the story element running through and build-up of the cycle.
Evening/beaming = innovative half-rhyme - I like this.
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Re: Re. elysian impinging
13th Sep 2019 5:20pm
LOL -- after i spilled this and read aloud
(i read aloud ALL my spills)
i made myself smile when i heard that half-rhyme
because it was totally by accident!
You know, as soon as i saw the words Madame Lavender chose for the < T's > comp i knew immediately that i was gonna enter and include today as part of the theme.
thank You for thoughtful read and share and kind comments.
Delighted You liked this spill
(i read aloud ALL my spills)
i made myself smile when i heard that half-rhyme
because it was totally by accident!
You know, as soon as i saw the words Madame Lavender chose for the < T's > comp i knew immediately that i was gonna enter and include today as part of the theme.
thank You for thoughtful read and share and kind comments.
Delighted You liked this spill
Re: Re. elysian impinging
19th Sep 2019 1:09am
I agree! This is totally the instant that occurred with my madness poem!!! I too read all my proverbial journal entries in my book of life aloud as well, and I too had a smirk when hearing “....that in itself should then disprove that which I’m pondering!
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Re: Re. elysian impinging
Ha Ha i was wondering if someone was gonna make mention of my use of Textile.
After we (You and me) read one of the alphabet spills that LunaGreyhawk wrote and we both were floored by how She penned it and if She had not told us it was for a comp we would have never known!
I wanted to spill like Her and so it's what i attempted to do here.
Maybe i succeeded (or came close) based on Your comments here
Thank You for the read and sharing with me
and the kind praise
After we (You and me) read one of the alphabet spills that LunaGreyhawk wrote and we both were floored by how She penned it and if She had not told us it was for a comp we would have never known!
I wanted to spill like Her and so it's what i attempted to do here.
Maybe i succeeded (or came close) based on Your comments here
Thank You for the read and sharing with me
and the kind praise
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Re: Re. elysian impinging
15th Sep 2019 7:22am
Selene & Gaia are the Goddesses who i've Honored for going on 40+ years (the length i've been involved with magick)
My Pagan Festivals are near upon us:
Mabon & Samhain
I don't really celebrate Halloween unless it's to perform a ritual to call out my Daughter, as the veil thins and it takes less Ki from me to do so.
Very appreciative of Your read and wonderful share
Honored for the RL add
My Pagan Festivals are near upon us:
Mabon & Samhain
I don't really celebrate Halloween unless it's to perform a ritual to call out my Daughter, as the veil thins and it takes less Ki from me to do so.
Very appreciative of Your read and wonderful share
Honored for the RL add
Re. elysian impinging
15th Sep 2019 4:56pm
Watch out for the tarantula looking to tether on your testicles...great write T
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Re: Re. elysian impinging
15th Sep 2019 7:15pm
I sometimes wander how long it would take me to find a Tarantula out there in the desert and bring it home to take care of the insects & rodent that keep trying to come in.......... LOL
appreciate the kind praise, Brother
appreciate the kind praise, Brother
Re. elysian impinging
16th Sep 2019 8:51am
I get a feeling of "change" from this. Maybe it be a transition of season or personal.
"We will not allow these Interlopers to spoil our fun, our ritual to our Goddess".
A sense of routine that is in the wake of interuption or dismay. Something that has occured of so long, yet an outside force attempt to interrupt something that is sacred and important for all that is involved.
"We will not allow these Interlopers to spoil our fun, our ritual to our Goddess".
A sense of routine that is in the wake of interuption or dismay. Something that has occured of so long, yet an outside force attempt to interrupt something that is sacred and important for all that is involved.
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Re: Re. elysian impinging
16th Sep 2019 9:02am
This is fiction based on personal experiences from my past.
I used to belong to a coven and sometimes hikers would stumble upon us doing a midnight moonlight ritual and You know hikers are always so freakin' curious! LOL!
But maybe on an unconscious level it could be everything You felt
thank You for the read and sharing with me
appreciate
I used to belong to a coven and sometimes hikers would stumble upon us doing a midnight moonlight ritual and You know hikers are always so freakin' curious! LOL!
But maybe on an unconscious level it could be everything You felt
thank You for the read and sharing with me
appreciate
Re: Re. elysian impinging
16th Sep 2019 9:14am
That must have been frightening and interesting for you lol. I can only imagine the experience for everyone there. Thank you for sharing regardless. I feel like most of your poems are a story or an event in your personal life. Keep them coming.
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Re: Re. elysian impinging
16th Sep 2019 8:09pm
Only frightening for our new and young coven members.
Back then in the mid 1970's and beyond in southern California people were not as open and open-minded as today.
& You are correct -- most of my spills are based on my life be they fiction or not
Back then in the mid 1970's and beyond in southern California people were not as open and open-minded as today.
& You are correct -- most of my spills are based on my life be they fiction or not
Re. elysian impinging
16th Sep 2019 8:31pm
dearest Tallen I love this magic charged write
while I don't practice magic I know it's in me
captivating read...
love Brenda ❤
while I don't practice magic I know it's in me
captivating read...
love Brenda ❤
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Re: Re. elysian impinging
16th Sep 2019 9:01pm
Beautiful Sister,
everyone IMHO has magick contained within but not everyone believes and so their ethereal dust remains in a stasis-flux.
If You are aware then You CAN use it even if You don't follow the way of the craft.
thank You for reading and the kind share
everyone IMHO has magick contained within but not everyone believes and so their ethereal dust remains in a stasis-flux.
If You are aware then You CAN use it even if You don't follow the way of the craft.
thank You for reading and the kind share
Re: Re. elysian impinging
16th Sep 2019 9:06pm
I do use it dearest Tallen I cast when I write at times and also when I paint... my energies are infused within my gifts... I've never studied perse but still, I know it's effective ❤
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Re: Re. elysian impinging
16th Sep 2019 9:11pm
awesome!
I always had a feeling You might be using magick
and until now
thought maybe You practiced the way.
: )
I always had a feeling You might be using magick
and until now
thought maybe You practiced the way.
: )
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18th Sep 2019 7:32am
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18th Sep 2019 7:36am
Re. elysian impinging
19th Sep 2019 00:23am
I too am a pagan The world is a wonderful mystery to me at this moment. After having read this, I have to think that you and I have been fated somehow. I could be mistaken, but it is not very likely as there are no such things as coincidences!! Beautiful write by the way
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Re: Re. elysian impinging
19th Sep 2019 00:32am
Beautiful Sister
think this ---------
there is no such think as s coincidence
Only SYNCHRONICITIES ( i want You to research and read up on this word)
I too, believe something ethreally is transpiring and You among a few other have crossed my Tao
& i am taking notice
think this ---------
there is no such think as s coincidence
Only SYNCHRONICITIES ( i want You to research and read up on this word)
I too, believe something ethreally is transpiring and You among a few other have crossed my Tao
& i am taking notice